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Quoting Charlamane:
Well .... did you? I've heard of cliff hangers before but never with such a short story line, why, it takes at least seven words just to set the mood. Seven more words to set the lead in and seven more to the big climax of the narative. It would sorta go like this ......... "It was a dull and stormy day. Two men huddled around a sputtering campfire. One turned to the other and said, "Will I get laid today?"" ......... See, isn't that much better, more exciting and yes even a little funny, I see ya smilin. I'm sitting here on the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting chapter two of your dissertation, wondering in excitement, did or did he not get laid. Oh, this is so exciting. See you next time, same station. ........... Charlamane
Well .... did you? I've heard of cliff hangers before but never with such a short story line, why, it takes at least seven words just to set the mood. Seven more words to set the lead in and seven more to the big climax of the narative. It would sorta go like this ......... "It was a dull and stormy day. Two men huddled around a sputtering campfire. One turned to the other and said, "Will I get laid today?"" ......... See, isn't that much better, more exciting and yes even a little funny, I see ya smilin. I'm sitting here on the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting chapter two of your dissertation, wondering in excitement, did or did he not get laid. Oh, this is so exciting. See you next time, same station. ........... Charlamane
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