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Frenchkisspdx

total posts: 2
Posted on Mon, Sep 07, 2009 09:58

Will i get laid today ?


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Frenchkisspdx

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Posted on Thu, Sep 10, 2009 21:47

More than five words : what is "Offensive, profane, vulgar, abusive or messages" ?


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Charlamane

total posts: 8
Posted on Thu, Sep 10, 2009 02:23

Well .... did you? I've heard of cliff hangers before but never with such a short story line, why, it takes at least seven words just to set the mood. Seven more words to set the lead in and seven more to the big climax of the narative. It would sorta go like this ......... "It was a dull and stormy day. Two men huddled around a sputtering campfire. One turned to the other and said, "Will I get laid today?"" ......... See, isn't that much better, more exciting and yes even a little funny, I see ya smilin. I'm sitting here on the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting chapter two of your dissertation, wondering in excitement, did or did he not get laid. Oh, this is so exciting. See you next time, same station. ........... Charlamane


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